LOL
Man that was funny man
But also cruel
what is with the clock faces and the computer seems like heaps of people are doing them now.
Why does the beginning says "Paly"? Is it a mispelling?
LOL
Man that was funny man
But also cruel
what is with the clock faces and the computer seems like heaps of people are doing them now.
Why does the beginning says "Paly"? Is it a mispelling?
Ok, I'm going to answer your questions with one answer, The paly, computer voice and clock faces are a part of the clock crew, they're a big orginization on newgrounds right now, go check them out sometime.
0_0 great :D
woah
another well done poem
one little problem i think the switching pages were a bit too quick
new style of background looks great.
a way of to stop making the pages appear to move quickly is using a narator
Keep it up man! :D ^.^
Once I find a narrator, or train my self there will be one. Also people wanted faster pages so there ya go XD You can ready it all if you try, but i'll slow it down a few seconds in the next. Thanks for your suport.
nice
nice ton man
the characters could be better drawn but it looked good
nice music, where did you get it from?
keep it up! :D
I found the music on http://www.8bitpeoples.com/ it's a website with all 8bit artists who use like gameboy or nintendo sound cards to make all their music. and all the songs are free to DL. its dope stuff.
huh?
What the hell?
that is the most weirdest thing i have ever heard
was that a real turtle?
I have no idea.
LOL!
That is funny man.
Is there any more them coming out?
sure , why not . The full versions gonna be up as soon as i can find one of my friends with a high speed interent connection.
classic
that was hillarious man
the voices were bit unclear but it was good
A must watch
well done
Thank'ee.
Wow
Woah that cool man
is there going sequel to it or does the whole planet become overtaken by robots?
slightly jerky but not much.
Nicely made
thanx! a sequel? mm i don't know, could be fun...
amazing
woah
you did it again
this makes you have a chill down your spine ending with a blow that hard to forget
you have changed the way we see flash
what was the fourth word on the third top line? i couldn't tell what it was, lore or something, not sure
try using a narator for the next one but choose the narator wisely.
one more thing it should've said at the end "thanks for reading" :P
Thanks
ill grab a narator, hey I might even do it.
The word was loren btw.
Also i'll make it "thanks for reading" in the next one XD
one word: woah
I haven't seen any flash like this before
a saddening sorrowful flash
you have brought a new side and sense to newgrounds that I have never seen before.
Well done!
Thats what I was trying to do. I figure NG needs some things like this, not just the usual meaningless blabber. Thanks for the coments, and I plan on making all my best weekly poems into these.
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